Monday 11 June 2018

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My name is Taylor. I go to Ormond School. I have two brothers.
I am good at football,cricket,drawing and designing. I enjoy playing sports and drawing. My challenge is a maths, writing and reading. My goal for this year is learning division.
I’m looking forward to playing football in winter. Hazard inspires me because I love football and he plays football for my favorite team Chelsea.

8 comments:

  1. kia ora Taylor
    great job on your blog Taylor. You must be a very good football player. I have heard of hazard and he is a good football player. Next time you write your blog do some more interesting ideas.
    Well done Taylor
    From Theo

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  2. hello Taylor
    great job on your blog.I no that you are a very good football player.next time you shooed put more info

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    1. Thanks stella I really like all the effort you put in
      from Taylor

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  3. Kia ora Im Kyanna from Te Hapara. I think it great that you like art. I really like art too. My favourite art is watercolour, what is your?

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    1. My favorite would be shading with pencil and I are pretty good at art because I am the best at art in the school

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  4. nice taylor thats funny I like those sport to. maybe you could use some different sentence types

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  5. Hi Taylor,I like how you added a lot of information about your favourite things. Next time remember to check your writing before you post it

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  6. Yo Taylor my name is Ben I like cricket as well my favorite team is Manchester. I just hope you don't go for arsenal in the future.

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